Revised Good Story: Downtown Street Racing

Two men appeared out of nowhere, a few yards apart in the narrow, moonlit lane lies Nissan 360 z. Niko Ventura and Tony Lopez enter into the car and drive to the street race held in Downtown Los Angeles. There is a 25,000 cash prize to the winner of the race and invitation to street race against the top street racers in Madrid, Spain. Tony races mainly for the money, when Niko races for the thrill and fun of street race in their home city. On the way to the race, they stop at Tony's sleezy safe house to get his Mustang GT and speed to the race. 

      When they arrive at the race there is about 15 other cars lined up to race. Tony and Niko line their cars up as well and the king of street racing in L.A. Ryan Speed waves a flag to indicate the drivers to start their engines. Ryan throws the flag in the air and that starts the race! At the moment the drivers take off, several cops pull out of nowhere and start chasing all the racers. Niko and Tony see the cops behind them, though they are so focused on winning, it doesn't even faze them.

     The cops start shooting electric treble hooks at the racers and if a hook attaches to your car, the car malfunctions and the car will stop. Racers start dropping like flies and only 5 cars are remaining. Niko and Tony are up in the front racing against three other drivers that were also fast enough to avoid getting hit by the cops. The drivers are half mile away from end marker and see that there is a bridge made to open in half for boats to past through and the bridge is up making a ramp for the drivers. Tony doesn't risk jumping over the bridge along with 2 other drivers, while Niko embraces the jump with only one other driver also attempting the jump. Niko clears the jump while the other driver crashed n burned. Niko wins the race and receives his money, street credit, and a trip to Spain to race!